TO DO: revision of a draft, make changes, add info, make it a good/better essay. the link I used for the original essay is:
TO DO: revision of a draft, make changes, add info, make it a good/better essay. the link I used for the original essay is: www.ted.com/talks/esha_chhabra_how_business_can_improve_the_world_not_just_the_bottom_line. the original essay is in the attached files. I. PURPOSEIn keeping with the English 101 goal for students to “revise to improve their own writing”